We did awesome last night, people were shooting and going into melee quite well, i think last night was the best LB we could of possibly had (but only to the ones i have been to). Frapp and Wuffles did an amazing job at leading us...
(any bad grammar will be corrected by either, Frap, cop, bond, or marshal....) *beep*
Allow me.
We did awesome last night. People were shooting and going into melee quite well. I think last night was the best line battle we could have possibly had (but only regarding the ones I have attended). Frappiller and Wuffles did an amazing job leading us.
Periods should be used instead of commas when writing independent clauses. Commas may sometimes be used when connecting two independent clauses using a conjunction or when tying a dependent clause to an independent one.
Use have, not of, when conveying the idea of an experience or undertaking.
I added "regarding" and "attended" to the parenthetical phrase for purposes of clarity.
On first reference it is best to refer to someone by their full name, thus the use of Frappiller instead of Frapp.
The use of the serial comma, or Oxford comma, between "bond" and "or" is debatable. In their AP Stylebook, The Associated Press instructs writers to refrain from using the Oxford comma. Personally, I'm a fan of the Oxford comma and feel it provides a smoother reading of lists like the one above.
Jesus Llapsullaleyeyalaally! Correct me as well because spelling you're name is harder than writing an essay! Also, I recall a certain mmm, Sergeant Major promising a certain somebody about an extravagant signature. Then again, I am quite the old man, and indeed have a bad memory. Lastly, enjoy editing this.
With love and twinkies-Ney
