Well I've not been mean to anyone today so here goes nothing.
Your thread is quite frankly, horrific, it is inconsistent, follows no set theme and is just all over the place. If this was my thread I would merely...give up altogether.
Personally I consider this constructive criticism. Use some BB coding, structure everything a bit more and you'll at least be heading in the right direction.
Oh and please don't post your entire thread in the "post here if looking for regiment" topic,it's blood irritating and well, no-one would join a regiment based on such an awful post.