Need feedback - NEW TRACK

[Dealen]

Hey everyone!

I just finished off my first basement track and i'm really in need of honest feedback!

Here is my track https://soundcloud.com/sorrezoo/clouds
Post your humble opinion in the comments below & i'll look through them!

Thanks in advance

EDIT: My latest remix - https://soundcloud.com/sorrezoo/zedd-spectrum-ft-matthew-koma-sorrezoo-remix

[Earth Bby]

Feels rushed no smoothing

[Fortune]

Is it supposed to sound like it's clipping?

[Syntax]

Tbh for your first track this is great work, GL in the future with your tracks.

[AeroNinja]

Let the Drum n base a bit louder or what it is. But for the rest its awesome for a first track.

[GerRagnar]

Use a eq too cuttoff more off the low frequencies of the lead, also dont add so much reverb (It makes it harder to mix your leads correctly).
I can hardly hear any bass in your kick drum its just clipping.

The melody gets really random at around 1 minute, the sidechan sounds offbeat. I also dont like the laser sound, it just sounds odd to me. The melodies overall are ok but nothing special try to add more variation throughout the whole track maybe add some hi hats and other cymbals in background and try to do a smoother ending with a outfading whitnoise or something.

[Dealen]

Allright thanks lads!

[AeroNinja]

Use a eq too cuttoff more off the low frequencies of the lead, also dont add so much reverb (It makes it harder to mix your leads correctly).
I can hardly hear any bass in your kick drum its just clipping.

The melody gets really random at around 1 minute, the sidechan sounds offbeat. I also dont like the laser sound, it just sounds odd to me. The melodies overall are ok but nothing special try to add more variation throughout the whole track maybe add some hi hats and other cymbals in background and try to do a smoother ending with a outfading whitnoise or something.

This is actually a nice thought.

[GerRagnar]

Use a eq too cuttoff more off the low frequencies of the lead, also dont add so much reverb (It makes it harder to mix your leads correctly).
I can hardly hear any bass in your kick drum its just clipping.

The melody gets really random at around 1 minute, the sidechan sounds offbeat. I also dont like the laser sound, it just sounds odd to me. The melodies overall are ok but nothing special try to add more variation throughout the whole track maybe add some hi hats and other cymbals in background and try to do a smoother ending with a outfading whitnoise or something.

This is actually a nice thought.

aayy

[~NickCole~]

its Nice!

[Dealen]

I really appricate the feeback guys, this will improven my future reccords!

[Dealen]

Is anyone here interested in EDM music at all?

[Carolus.]

Hey everyone!

I just finished off my first basement track and i'm really in need of honest feedback!

Here is my track https://soundcloud.com/sorrezoo/clouds
Post your humble opinion in the comments below & i'll look through them!

Thanks in advance

Pakalu Papito GG

[Dealen]

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Hey everyone!

I just finished off my first basement track and i'm really in need of honest feedback!

Here is my track https://soundcloud.com/sorrezoo/clouds
Post your humble opinion in the comments below & i'll look through them!

Thanks in advance

Pakalu Papito GG

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I am Kanye West now!

[GerRagnar]

Is anyone here interested in EDM music at all?

sure m8, Im producing music for around 3 years now, nothing professional just playing around I am also visiting some events in Germany and the Netherlands like Q-Base or The Qontinent