Use a eq too cuttoff more off the low frequencies of the lead, also dont add so much reverb (It makes it harder to mix your leads correctly).
I can hardly hear any bass in your kick drum its just clipping.
The melody gets really random at around 1 minute, the sidechan sounds offbeat. I also dont like the laser sound, it just sounds odd to me. The melodies overall are ok but nothing special try to add more variation throughout the whole track maybe add some hi hats and other cymbals in background and try to do a smoother ending with a outfading whitnoise or something.